Dear Hiring Manager,
It is my great pleasure to have a chance to write this letter to you. While I was preparing for recruitment starting in March, I heard about associate sales engineer analyst within your office through university club member. I received a master’s degree in OOOOO Engineering after graduating from the OO University, Republic of Korea. 좋은점 1
I aimed to hardware coding experts rather than software since I was a freshman. For this purpose, I completed a course of embedded software coding. I always have thought that applying other techniques allows new perspective. Therefore, I studied many things on my own such as basics of security, multicore programming, and 3D printing. These aspects might be helpful for me to learn new work at your team.아쉬운점 1
I had studied for two years in OOO(OOO-on-OOO) laboratory. In the lab, I have usually researched about development of semiconductor IP especially in part of video codec. I had opportunities of announcements in conferences and handled a lot of documents such as grant reports. So I also have some experiences and skills of office work and MS office software. This makes me more confident with adapting to your company.아쉬운점 2
Please feel free to contact me with any questions at +82-10-OOOO-OOOO or OOO@OO.ac.kr. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
OO Kim
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